Mid-November fog--
Everything's muffled and drips.
Late lone cricket-song.
Nice. I keep reading that last line as "late Ione cricket song."
http://www.ione-ca.com/
Posted by: Chris Clarke at November 19, 2004 06:24 AMbeautiful image :)
second line maybe better as ...
"Everything, muffled, drips" (?)
does that better catch the stillness -- the long moment in time that the fog provides?
as you can see, i'm addicted to commas, especially when they help dispose of little words
lousy poet, but might have hope as an editor, or not, lemme know
peace, jarrett
Posted by: Jarrett at November 19, 2004 02:21 PMYeah, love it. Lucky to have a late lone cricket song! Here we just get the drips!
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